How to develop a strong voice

Writing coach: I agree with him. I also want to bring up voice again because I notice some writers have problems with consistency and unity - their style slips and then the reader loses trust. Consistency in grammar, tone, word choice, etc, is so key to a voice that has clout. I also want to remind you that some of the best writers write the way they think and speak. Janet Evanovitch, the mystery writer, comes to mind.

I think in fiction trust also comes when the writer grounds it in the real world so that the reader believes in the setting and circumstances. Fiction readers trust you when you write about a world they can believe in, experience through the senses, filled with furniture and brand names, etc. By unity - keeping it all together.

iVillage: Isn't consistency in grammar, usage, etc, almost a given? Are you arguing against the thesaurus?

Writing coach: No, a lot of people are inconsistent - then their writing kind of thumps, flounders and they don't realise it. It's a common problem with beginning writing.

iVillage: What is your opinion on writers like Kafka and Marquez and Poe (and even sci-fi and fantasy writers)?

Writing coach: It's been so long since I read them - obviously they're masters, but I'm on to other kinds of authors these days. You'd probably say they are easier to read. Right now, I'm reading the new Wally Lamb.

iVillage: Do you write all of your thoughts out first, then proceed to the actual book?

Writing coach: I make a few notes as I go through my days. But I think you should try to get your main ideas and first draft down as quickly as possible with as little editing as possible. Don't let it simmer too long or it loses its power. This brings us back to finding voice - it comes from lots of writing. It's like writing towards a fabulous reward - like an emerald mine. We combine words, find ourselves, go deeper, mix, simmer, cook - it's a good time.

iVillage: Do you talk about your work in progress? Does it lose some power if you discuss it with others?

Writing coach: It works for me because I hang out with other writers and we like to commiserate a bit and help each other over hurdles. I need to know I'm not alone in my projects.

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